La Llorona

Deep in the black velvet ooze
At the bottom of the saltwater cavern,
I found her weeping for her children.

Her weeping makes her monstrous.

Mothers warn their young ones away
And secretly worry
about where choices have led them–
About the salt in their blood.

I see her

Raw fingers raking the sludge,
so long from giving love.
My hands ache and sweat;
I taste my death but cannot look away.

Her hollow eyes focus on me and the time is fulfilled.

I kneel in front of her,
Take her hands to my breast,
And kiss her wide mouth long and full.

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2 responses to “La Llorona”

  1. Stephanie Pires Avatar
    Stephanie Pires

    Maybe the form is inspired by here. And certainly the subject. But I think the hands that wrote this, the brain it came from and your life’s experiences are the pure inspiration. Also, I’ve always felt like LaLorna kind of got a bad rap. all in all. You have certainly done her justice here.

    1. RobinCrow Avatar
      RobinCrow

      Your estimation means so much. Thank you. I felt this as true experience, not simply a reaction or commentary on CPE’s work. Though her book was a great catalyst in my life, to look and see and accept the darknesses and of course the strengths. George Eliot served much the same! 🙂 Such compassion that woman had along with her clear sight into the fallable human nature. <3

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